22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_qmhPGnoccs&t=6s
2. I received some great feedback from my last Elevator Pitch that I think made this one the best one yet! They recommended to adjust the background and to speak at a more formal pace which seemed as the most insightful. I really liked how I kept my tone at a very professional level because it seemed as if I was speaking to class of 20+ people instead of just to a camera lens.
3. So I changed the background for this Elevator Pitch, adjusted the camera eye level a little, and used less hand gestures. Although my classmates did not recommend all three of these, I wanted to change them myself because it would ultimately turn out better. This is one of my favorite assignments from this class because it has built my speaking confidence!
2. I received some great feedback from my last Elevator Pitch that I think made this one the best one yet! They recommended to adjust the background and to speak at a more formal pace which seemed as the most insightful. I really liked how I kept my tone at a very professional level because it seemed as if I was speaking to class of 20+ people instead of just to a camera lens.
3. So I changed the background for this Elevator Pitch, adjusted the camera eye level a little, and used less hand gestures. Although my classmates did not recommend all three of these, I wanted to change them myself because it would ultimately turn out better. This is one of my favorite assignments from this class because it has built my speaking confidence!
ReplyDeleteHi Matthew,
You truly improved a lot on your third elevator pitch video. You seem to really have taken all of your suggestions to heart and put forth a great effort into communicating your parking decal product. I also think that you remained very professional both in your mannerisms, attire, and tone. The only thing that I still found to be a tad distracting was the background, but that is a very minor detail.
Hey Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI hadn't had the opportunity to look at your past elevator pitches so I went back and watched the other two and the progression throughout these three pitches was really amazing. You could see the extra effort put into each and I think that you really put the effort into making sure you incorporate the recommendations that others had commented on; I really did not find too much out of place or distracting. You really did an amazing job.
Hey Matt,
ReplyDeleteI enjoy watching your video. I think you have provided enough analysis on why UF should sale the decal to the off-campus student and it really gives benefits to both UF and off-students. So, I really like your plan. Your tone is very professional which make your plan become more convincing. However, I think maybe you could stand in a brighter background so that it could be more like a professional speech. Excellent！